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Monday, June 26, 2017

Frank the train robber 🚂

Frank is a very greedy fella. His day job is being a sneeky train robber. His pencil-like,wiry,flexible body comes in handy when robbing trains and on top of his body is his stretched,string,snowy head that smells of strawberry sented shampoo. His face has some pretty cool features like his reflective,vast,berly eyes that are like a crystal clear flowing river. You can't forget his far-reaching,scrawny,sharp nose that looks like a long bridge. He robs trains with his brother Jesse. They are wanted for criminal acts. If you see them please turn them in and for extra info his cerulean,creamy,cowboyish clothes are as old as time.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Jenna, My name is Kaedun from St.Bernadette's School Hornby And I like how you said his Job is being a sneaky train robber that put a picture in my head of him stealing trains one by one And I like how you put tones of information in that group of work and you told me about him and his clothes I think that that is a piece of work.

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  2. Hi Jenna,My name is Kaedun and here is my blog link if you want to comment on mine. http://stbskaedunl.blogspot.co.nz/

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