Shalóm Jenna, I really enjoyed your slideshow on Pax, it was extremely clear to read. Next time maybe add some more color to make it more entertaining for the eyes. I like the part when you said ‘just in case the phone dies’. Farewell, Holly
hola Jenna I really enjoyed your slideshow,because I liked the way you changed from one slide to the next, at the beginning. The things you took were very smart. I would take that too. Next time you could tell us more about the story.
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Shalóm Jenna,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your slideshow on Pax, it was extremely clear to read. Next time maybe add some more color to make it more entertaining for the eyes. I like the part when you said ‘just in case the phone dies’.
Farewell,
Holly
hola Jenna I really enjoyed your slideshow,because I liked the way you changed from one slide to the next, at the beginning. The things you took were very smart. I would take that too. Next time you could tell us more about the story.
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